tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19861369.post1485870265968719181..comments2023-10-03T10:40:18.391+02:00Comments on STORYPOT: Soccer Mom, By Pamela MoengDamaria Sennehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16933949808230808200noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19861369.post-86675244301347876502011-03-17T00:10:05.646+02:002011-03-17T00:10:05.646+02:00This made me smile :) looking forward to the next...This made me smile :) looking forward to the next one.pohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711119384786965311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19861369.post-32922693899680497912011-03-12T18:45:02.862+02:002011-03-12T18:45:02.862+02:00Aw, this is a lovely story. Thank you for sharing....Aw, this is a lovely story. Thank you for sharing. <br /><br />A wee writer tip - trust your reader. In dialogue there is no need to add info such as 'she explained,' or 'he assured her.' We can see that due to your dialogue :-)tiahhttp://tiahbeautement.typepad.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19861369.post-24278235159343447982011-03-11T10:21:59.783+02:002011-03-11T10:21:59.783+02:00Lovely romantic story, Pam. It flows nicely. And m...Lovely romantic story, Pam. It flows nicely. And maybe it's because I was a single mom too, so I could relate. I'm wondering if DRUM still publishes these types of stories? <br /><br />What I want to know though is, where's my Jack?Damaria Sennehttp://damariasenne.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com